After Glowing

In rented rooms
they began late,
a lovers tryst
across the county line.

His observation
of alternating glances,
revealed intention
to the clerk.

They defined love
in fluid movements,
placing their guilt
on a bedside table.

~ by jbrooks on January 10, 2008.

4 Responses to “After Glowing”

  1. I like the voyeuristic feel to this one. Its like we get a tiny view into this couples secret….very interesting.

  2. Lived this one out in sin in hopes of finding love, truth, peace, and completion. I found that I could not really explain them all and did not find the truth till much later on in life.

  3. begs the question with the implied answer: ‘What is love?’

  4. hei, i like how you put your words on! =)

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