Blot (slightly off center)

Into your arms,
downward, I fell
reversing death.

and discovered clarity,
despite your attempts
to shroud it from me.

Eventually though,
I will fall out,
and rise upward.

Closing all windows,
as I depart,
that lead to your dream.

~ by jbrooks on May 16, 2008.

5 Responses to “Blot (slightly off center)”

  1. I like the arc in this. That path is one that some people are too afraid to take. Kudos to you for that. Keep this feeling, and gain even more strength and empowerment from it. I have a respect for people having the courage to take action, blazing your own pathway!

  2. Mythicist says : I absolutely agree with this !

  3. so glad to see u are back – and a beautiful re-entrance too!

    btw, i have moved some of my raw expressionistic pieces to a new blog:
    http:// bunnybluhues.wordpress.com

    welcome back, janise!

  4. Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation :) Anyway … nice blog to visit.

    cheers, Flackery.

  5. Thanks guys for all the comments!! LOL, Sometimes I make points in my pieces that only have meaning to me. I like to be slightly
    obscure, and then it totally amazes me when folks do get it. So, your comment gave me a good laugh. Thanks Flackery. Come back by anytime.

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